A Short Poem on Being Present
An unexpected minute of delight. I didn’t know you wrote poetry! That was really enjoyable and worth a second read!
I thought it was actually pretty good!
Musing missives
Excellent work!
Thank you sir! :D
Well done. very sensory and drew me right in. thank you.
Felt this! 🥰
I found the 'just so' at the end of each line early in the poem, very irritating, would be better with a more judicious use of the phrase. It looses its impact with the repetition.
An unexpected minute of delight. I didn’t know you wrote poetry! That was really enjoyable and worth a second read!
I thought it was actually pretty good!
Musing missives
Excellent work!
Thank you sir! :D
Well done. very sensory and drew me right in. thank you.
Felt this! 🥰
I found the 'just so' at the end of each line early in the poem, very irritating, would be better with a more judicious use of the phrase. It looses its impact with the repetition.